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About Me Official Beta Tester Deviant of Many Talents Shivarra52/Female/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 3 Years
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What I Can DoTheres so many things I want to do  To show you how I feel for you  But I have no money to do these things  And for me a little sadness it brings  So I thought and I thought of what I can do  And here's the things I can give to you   
I can be there for you  
when times get tough  and goodness knows  
they're tough enough  I can be beside you  Night and day  and never ever go away  I can give you the key  that holds my heart  So no one can ever  Tear us apart  I can do silly things  to make you laugh  and write you a note  in hopes I get o What I Can Do
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Personal HellWhere shattered realms of disbelief  Merge with masses built from grief  Passion once a lifetime knew  An angel cries, chaos brews  Groves of distance filled with sadness  Teardrops fall embracing madness  Heart bereft of a soul itself  Captures emptiness,  And so shall dwell  
Through time no more  A personal hell Personal Hell
by =Shivarra
Ten Words For My LoveTen words from my love...  to tell him how i feel  to paint him a picture  of something so real   
Where love fills  a once empty space  and time captures distance  two souls do embrace,  Chaos turns to passion  Angels gather round  and listen to the whispers  of true loves wonderous sound  Two hearts beating  
melding into one  feel the senses reeling  hear the trumpets roar  Near groves of orchid blossoms  seeming all so surreal  Ten words my love sent me  to tell him how i feel   
and softly she whispers  Forever...i'm yours Ten Words For My Love
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Food For ThoughtHigh in the sky,  
clouds and ash,  
floating like a kite on a windy spring day;  make the sun seem obsolete.   
From my window,  I can see the huge masses of volcanic gas;  swirling and billowing;  
like demons on a quest for your soul,  making the sky so dirty.  All that is visible is an ugly gray....   
The rocks burst from the mouth of the monster  with a force I'm unable to comprehend.  The volcano spews its' hot liquid  and fills the air with gasses,  Its' appetite not yet quenched.  The molten lava flows downward  cascading like a waterfall... &nb Food For Thought
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The sky called to me  As did the boundless sea  I saw the setting sun  My task has just begun   
The child within me  May never come to be  No matter, for I will try  It is our turn to fly   
I spread my wings  And left behind the things  That may stop this child  Being born with a smile   
We flew so very far  From the things that mar  This child's life within  And so our journey begins   
As my wings grew tired  I took to the sea, inspired  I swam and breached  This child I must keep   
As I reached the land  I s
The Child Within Me
by =OpheliaWhispers

This is a beautifully sad story. I enjoyed this very much. I could only see a couple of places where it might need a bit of tweaking....

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Fumbling, frantic,  
Oh God,  
 Oh God,  What have I done, What have I done?  Oh flying fiddlesticks, and flipping pancakes,  
Oh Jellybellies and sugar cane soup.  
 
This anxiety before it drowns me,  
Can I gulp it down with my coffee?
gulp...
by ~Wombat-Pentagram

Oh I love this!! For someone who is so stressed atm, you have given stress a fairy-tale quality. I love the flying fiddlesticks and f...

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While the sun did slip  From the sky above  I decided to take a trip  And look for my long lost love   
I traveled through Spring flowers  All yearning for the light  I felt myself empowered  My love for him grew to new heights  
 
Along this path I knew  That I could bring forth all I had  Walking out of the blue  I left behind the baggage, so glad   
That I could bring forth  What love I held inside  And never change course  And never have to hide   
As I rounded a hilltop  
My love came into sight  My heart it nearly stopped  
Blown to the Four Winds
by =OpheliaWhispers

I really love this poem. It flows well, it has rhyme all the way through the poem. The story is wonderful. Going from joyous love to...

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dammit
by ~peace-or-release

Your anger comes out quite well in this one. I don't really see a need to change much. You rhyme is good, your expression and...

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Hello Everyone =)

Journal Entry: Mon Oct 12, 2009, 11:26 AM
  • Mood: Neutral
  • Listening to: the tv
  • Reading: Twilight
  • Watching: Twilight
  • Playing: Celtic Kings and a fishing game on my ps2
  • Eating: nothing atm
  • Drinking: coffee with hazelnut creamer
I really want to work from home, like typing documents and papers for people or editing papers, documents people have written. I just dont know where to start. I have been to several "job sites" ..but..i dont know, i'm thinking maybe i need to start a site of my own for this...any suggestions/help would be greatly appreciated.

Hope you are all fairing well.

Many thanks,

Shivarra

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Feeling a liitle frazzled lately, lol.

Devious Info

  • Current Residence: The only place I care to be
  • Interests: poetry, fishing, camping, playing guitar, music
  • Favourite movie: Too many to count really
  • Favourite band or musician: Nickleback, 3 Doors Down, Evanescence, etc
  • Favourite genre of music: most kinds...alternative rock, classic rock,new country, oldies, etc....
  • Favourite artist: bunches
  • Favourite poet or writer: several
  • Operating System: Windows?
  • MP3 player of choice: none
  • Shell of choice: none
  • Wallpaper of choice: none
  • Skin of choice: mine
  • Favourite game: FFVII and FFX, Kingdom Hearts, God of War, Yu-gi-oh Nightmare or something like that, lol.
  • Favourite gaming platform: Nintendo DS
  • Favourite cartoon character: Goofy.....I love his scream when he falls and his laugh
  • Personal Quote: It's a beautiful day <i> to hide your head in the sand<i>
  • Tools of the Trade: pen, paper, my computer

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~Chilliman1975 Oct 12, 2009, 1:37:29 PM
Hiya!!! Left PS 'coz it wasn't the place we knew anymore. Sad really but we've been on here for quite a while now, the both of us! Good to see you on here too.
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=Shivarra Oct 20, 2009, 4:39:31 PM
Hiya back!! And I see that lol. I can tell by all the deviations and of course it shows when you joined. =p Glad i found you two though =)

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~mazblondie Oct 12, 2009, 11:48:38 AM
YAY...hiya sweetie, hope you are well? see you have loads posted here, will have to get my specs on and get reading...missed you so much xxxx

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God must love idiots, he made so many of them
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=Shivarra Oct 12, 2009, 11:51:58 AM
Me too you lol ..so glad to see you here!! I saw you left PS you and your hubby ;(

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~mazblondie Oct 12, 2009, 11:53:25 AM
he is on here too, he is chilliman xx

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God must love idiots, he made so many of them
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=Shivarra Oct 12, 2009, 1:04:12 PM
yay lol..i will add him to my devwatch =)

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~mazblondie Oct 12, 2009, 1:05:18 PM
:D

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God must love idiots, he made so many of them
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=Scarlettletters Sep 22, 2009, 1:35:40 PM
Thank-you so much for faving my work.

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=Shivarra Sep 23, 2009, 6:13:28 AM
You are very welcome. =)

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*welshdragon Sep 21, 2009, 12:59:06 PM
Thanks again for the favs
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